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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. v.1

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. v. 1
The given line graph compares the amount of goods transported in the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002 via road, water, rail and pipeline. According to the given data, initially in 1974, more than 70 million tons of goods were transported to the UK on the road while around 40 million tons was transported via water and rail transportations. Least quantity of goods (around 5 million tons) was transported in pipelines in this same year. Over the year the quantity transported via road increased with some fluctuations and reached to about 100 million tons in 2002. The water transports were used more for transporting goods to the UK and except in 1998, the amount of goods transported in waterway kept on increasing and finally reached to over 60 million tons in 2002. The use of rail transportation system for carrying goods to the UK got reduced as less quantity of goods were transported in rails later years but finally, the quantity reached to 40 million tons in 2002. Finally, goods carried by pipelines increased over the year reached to over 20 million tons in 2002. In summary, road transportation and water transportation carried more quantity of goods in the UK than the quantity carried by pipelines and rails.
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given
line graph compares the amount of
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goods
transported in the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002 via
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road
,
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water
,
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rail
and pipeline.

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data,
initially
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million
tons of
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goods
were transported
to the UK on the
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road
while around 40
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million
tons
was transported
via
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water
and
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rail
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transportations
.
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Least
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quantity
of
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goods
(around 5
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million
tons)
was transported
in pipelines in this same
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year
.
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Over
the
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year
the
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quantity
transported via
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road
increased with
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some
fluctuations and
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reached
to about 100
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million
tons in 2002. The
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water
transports were
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used
more for transporting
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goods
to the UK and except in 1998, the amount of
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goods
transported in waterway
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kept
on increasing and
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reached
to
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over
60
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million
tons in 2002. The
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use
of
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rail
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transportation
system for carrying
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goods
to the UK
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got
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as less
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quantity
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goods
were transported
in rails later years
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quantity
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reached
to 40
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million
tons in 2002.
Finally
,
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goods
carried by pipelines increased
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over
the
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year
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reached
to
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over
20
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million
tons in 2002.

In summary,
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road
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transportation
and
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water
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transportation
carried more
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quantity
of
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goods
in the UK than the
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quantity
carried by pipelines and rails.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
48Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. v. 1

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3 paragraphs
208 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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