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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. v.2

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. v. 2
The graph illustrates the differences of transport during 1974 to 2002 in UK transport. It can be noticed that the graph for pipeline remained steady from 1994 to 2002. However, other means of transportation on roads, water and railways went up slowly in the same year. Goods transported using pipeline in the UK from 1974 and 2002 stayed constant at 20 million tonnes during 1994 up to 2002, which started from about one million tonnes in 1994. Unlike, Road and Water goods transported in those rose to 40 million tonnes. In the beginning 1974, Pipeline increased in 1982 almost 20 million tonnes and still maintained the same level from 1982 to 1990 and between 1990 to 1994 decreased slowly. Three goods transport in the UK (1974-2002) were Road, Water and Rail showed a rise slowly in 2002. Goods transported in Road got higher than Water and Rail. Although, the waterway goods transportation stayed constant approximately in 60 million tonnes in 1982. Roadway transported goods reduced slowly about 70 million tonnes. The pipeline had a different statistics which increased slowly but most still levelled out at null to twenty million tonnes than others fluctuated from 1975 until 2002.
The graph illustrates the differences of transport during 1974 to 2002 in UK transport. It can
be noticed
that the graph for pipeline remained steady from 1994 to 2002.
However
, other means of transportation on
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roads
,
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water
and railways went up
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slowly
in the same year.

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Goods
transported using pipeline in the UK
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from 1974 and 2002
stayed constant at 20
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million
tonnes during 1994 up to 2002, which
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started
from about one
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million
tonnes in 1994. Unlike,
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Road
and
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Water
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goods
transported in those rose to 40
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million
tonnes. In the beginning 1974, Pipeline increased in 1982 almost 20
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million
tonnes and
still
maintained the same level from 1982 to 1990 and
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between 1990 to 1994
decreased
slowly
.

Three
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goods
transport in the UK (1974-2002) were
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Road
,
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Water
and Rail
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showed
a rise
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slowly
in 2002.
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Goods
transported in
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Road
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got
higher than
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Water
and Rail.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, the waterway
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goods
transportation stayed constant approximately in 60
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million
tonnes in 1982. Roadway transported
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goods
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reduced
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slowly
about 70
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million
tonnes. The pipeline had a
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different
statistics which increased
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slowly
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but
most
still
levelled out at null to twenty
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million
tonnes than others fluctuated from 1975 until 2002.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. v. 2

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3 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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