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The Line graph illustrates the goods transported in UK from the year 1974 to 2002 by different means of transportation such as road, water, rail and pipeline. the data has been calibrated in million tonnes. overall, it is lucid that, all the four modes of transport shows fluctuations throughout the time period. however, road transport system experienced most goods to be transported, whereas pipeline experienced least. at the fleeting glance, it is crystal clear that goods transported by road initiated at 70 million tonnes in the year 1974. it showed some viceisitudes till the year 1998 and hit the crest at approximately 100 million in the year 2002. moreover, rail transportation stood at 40% in the year 1974, while in the following years it's dwindled to nearly 25 million tonne in the year 1994 and get escalated to again 40% in 2002 apart from this pipeline transport ek out at 5 million turn beginning year it is Rose sharply to really 20 million tonnes in 1994 however remained stable by the end of Asia what to more water transportation comprise at 89 million tonnes in the year 1974 for that in all it showed upward Trend and climbed to 62 million tonnes in the end year

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