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The pie charts illustrate the expenditure of a UK school exchange annually in 3 different years 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The pie charts illustrate the expenditure of a UK school exchange annually in 3 different years 1981, 1991 and 2001. PLG9d

The pie charts illustrate the expenditure of a UK school exchange annually in 3 different years 1981, 1991 and 2001. Overall, while spending increased gradually for insurance, equipment and furniture, the amount of UK school spent on resources e. g. books and workers’ salaries dropped correspondingly. And teachers’ salaries constituted the largest cost to the school throughout the period. Firstly, the graph seen a similar trend in the proportion of resources and teacher’s salaries which rise gradually from 15% to a fifth and from 40% to a half, respectively in the first 10 year period followed by a consistent decline by 6% and 5%, respectively in 2001. Conversely, the proportion of furniture and equipment accounted for less than a fifth in 1981 prior to a dramatic fall to 10% in the next 10 years. After that, that percentage increase rapidly by 18% to 23% in 2001. The amount of insurance experience a slight rise from 2% to 8% during the period. A opposite trend was witness in the amount of other workers’ salaries which decrease significantly from over a quarter to less than a fifth throughout the 30-year period.

The pie charts illustrate the expenditure of a UK school exchange annually
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 years 1981, 1991 and 2001. Overall
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salaries
 dropped correspondingly
. And teachers’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
 constituted the largest cost to the school throughout the period.

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 a similar trend in the proportion of resources and teacher’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
 which rise gradually
 from 15% to a fifth and from 40% to a half, respectively
 in the first
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year
 period followed by a consistent decline by 6% and 5%, respectively
 in 2001. Conversely
, the proportion of furniture and equipment accounted for less than a fifth in 1981 prior to a dramatic fall to 10% in the next
 10 years. After that, that percentage increase rapidly
 by 18% to 23% in 2001.

The amount of insurance experience a slight rise from 2% to 8% during the period. Use "An" instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'An
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 opposite trend was witness in the amount of other workers’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
 which decrease significantly
 from over a quarter to less than a fifth throughout the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
30-year
 period. 