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A survey to find the most popular destinations for a honeymoon

A survey to find the most popular destinations for a honeymoon 0wKrq

The given chart is the result of a recently conducted survey. With the aim to find out the most popular destination among 5000 honeymooners. Out of the 8 places, Thailand comes on top with 1, 410 couples choosing this, just ahead of the runner-up Bali, with 1, 335 couples. Costa Rica comes in third at 750 although its numbers only equivalent to half of Thailand's and Bali's. Moving on to the fourth spot is The Maldives at 600, which nearly triples the figures of Paris. Spain in the 7th position only has one-tenth of Thailand's total votes while The Greek Island quadruples the bottom position Lake District at 432 couples.

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 chart is the result of a recently conducted survey. With the aim to find out the most popular destination among 5000 honeymooners.

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comes
 on top with 1, 410 couples choosing this, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 ahead of the runner-up Bali, with 1, 335 couples. Costa Rica This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 in third at 750 although its numbers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 equivalent to half of Thailand's and Bali's. Moving on to the fourth spot is The Maldives at 600, which nearly
 triples the figures of Paris. Spain in the 7th position This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 has one-tenth of Thailand's total votes while The Greek Island quadruples the bottom position Lake District at 432 couples. 

IELTS academic A survey to find the most popular destinations for a honeymoon

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American English

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110 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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