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different marital situations among American adults in two years, 1970 and 2000.

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The first graph depicts the change in the number of marriages and divorces in the United States during a 30-year period beginning in 1970. The second graph shows the proportions of different marital situations among American adults in two years, 1970 and 2000. Overall, there was a definite decreasing trend in the number of individuals marrying in the United States. Although the majority of adult Americans were married in both recorded years, the number of persons who remained single in 2000 was significantly greater. In 1970, there were about 2. 6 million marriages and 1 million divorces in the USA. In the following decade, the number of marriages remained stable but then slowly dropped to 2. 3 and 2 million in 1990 and 2000 respectively. In contrast, the number of divorces reached its peak at about 1. 5 million in 1980 before plummeting back to 1 million divorces in 2000. The rate of adults who never got married in the USA was 15% in 1970 and 20% in 2000 which was significantly lower than the percentage of people who got married at about 70% in 1970 and dropped to 60% in 2000. At the same time, both the proportion of divorces and widows remained lower than 10%, the divorce rate rose up to nearly 10% and the number of widows slightly dropped to 6%.
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change
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of marriages and
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in the United States during a 30-year period beginning in 1970. The second graph
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marital situations among American adults in two years, 1970 and 2000.

Overall
, there was a
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definite
decreasing trend in the
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number
of individuals marrying in the United States. Although the majority of adult Americans
were married
in both recorded years, the
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number
of persons who remained single in 2000 was
significantly
greater.

In 1970, there were about 2. 6
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million
marriages and 1
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million
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divorces
in the USA. In the following decade, the
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number
of marriages remained stable
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but
then
slowly
dropped to 2. 3 and 2
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million
in 1990 and 2000
respectively
.
In contrast
, the
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number
of
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divorces
reached its peak at about 1. 5
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million
in 1980
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before
plummeting back to 1
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million
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divorces
in 2000.

The rate of adults who never
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married in the USA was 15% in 1970 and 20% in 2000 which was
significantly
lower than the percentage of
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people
who
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married at about 70% in 1970 and dropped to 60% in 2000. At the same time, both the proportion of
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divorces
and widows remained lower than 10%, the
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divorce
rate rose up to
nearly
10% and the
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number
of widows
slightly
dropped to 6%.
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IELTS academic different marital situations among American adults in two years, 1970 and 2000.

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