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The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. o3nD
The graph chart illustrates the proportion of 4 different materials that are recycled from 28 years between 1982 and 2010. If we see the graph Aluminium cans went high from starting the end not becoming lees recycled in middle of the any year from starting to the end. The same happend with plastics to but not much recycled. However, Paper and cardboard occupied high percentage of recycled in between all years from 1982 to 2010 from starting 60 percentage in 1982 and reach 80 % in 1992 and end up with 70% in end of 2010. Glass containers also had a good recycled having second place in recycled. It's started from 50 percentage to ended with 60 percentage, having little down in 1988 having 40 percentage recycled. However, Paper and plastic had a good recycled from stating to end. Paper recycled starting less than 10 percent to reaching 35 percentage in the end. Plastic had a very low percent in staring and end up with less than 10 percent. Conclusion, except plastic other three had a good recycled.
The graph chart illustrates the proportion of 4
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from 28 years between 1982 and 2010.
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end
not becoming lees
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recycled
in middle of the any year from starting to the
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. The same
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plastics
to
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not much
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recycled
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, Paper and cardboard occupied high
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percentage
of
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recycled
in between all years from 1982 to 2010 from starting 60
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percentage
in 1982 and reach 80 % in 1992 and
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end
up with 70% in
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end
of 2010. Glass containers
also
had a
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good
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recycled
having second place in
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recycled
. It's
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started
from 50
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percentage
to ended with 60
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percentage
, having
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down in 1988 having 40
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percentage
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recycled
.
However
, Paper and
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plastic
had a
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good
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recycled
from stating to
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end
. Paper
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recycled
starting less than 10 percent to reaching 35
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percentage
in the
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.
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Plastic
had a
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low percent in staring and
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end
up with less than 10 percent. Conclusion, except
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plastic
other three had a
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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