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The graph below shows the price of bananas in 4 different countries from 1996 to 2004. Summarise the infromation by selecting and reporting the main features and amake comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the price of bananas in 4 different countries from 1996 to 2004. Summarise the infromation by selecting and reporting the main features and amake comparisons where relevant. wrgr
The amount of banana prices in four dissimilar countries with kilogram in dollar currency during 8 years is depicted in the line graph. Generally speaking, it is apparent from information supplied that the bananas price both japan and Germany had significant increase, while the other countries had stable trend. Both japan and Germany was increased slightly. In the early period, the amount of banana prices in japan and Germany started at 2 and 1, 5 dollars per kilograms respectively. Germany had fluctuated trend which experienced dramatic rise from 2 to 3 between 1996 and 1997 and then Germany had final number in 2. 5 dollars. It was increased just 0. 5 dollar per kilogram, while the japan witnessed a slight jump under 2 dollar during 8 years. On the other hand, the other countries like the USA and France had a stable trend. France started at 2 and than down to 1, 5 dollar, but in the final period, france had the stable trend. Hence b
The amount of banana prices in four dissimilar countries with kilogram in
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dollar
currency during 8 years
is depicted
in the line graph.
Generally
speaking, it is apparent from information supplied that the bananas price both
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japan
and Germany had significant increase, while the other countries had stable trend.

Both
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japan
and Germany
was increased
slightly
. In the early period, the amount of banana prices in
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japan
and Germany
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started
at 2 and 1, 5
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dollars
per kilograms
respectively
. Germany had fluctuated trend which experienced dramatic rise from 2 to 3 between 1996 and 1997 and then Germany had final number in 2. 5
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dollars
. It
was increased
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just
0. 5
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dollar
per kilogram, while the
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japan
witnessed a slight jump under 2
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dollar
during 8 years.

On the other hand
, the other countries like the USA and France had a stable trend. France
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started
at 2 and
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than
down to 1, 5
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dollar
,
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but
in the final period,
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france
had the stable trend.
Hence
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b

IELTS academic The graph below shows the price of bananas in 4 different countries from 1996 to 2004. Summarise the infromation by selecting and reporting the main features and amake comparisons where relevant.

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3 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
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