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The given diagram explains the coffee manufacturing the beans into a consumable product.

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The given diagram explains the coffee manufacturing the beans into a consumable product. There were nine steps in manufacturing the beans from harvesting until a ready-to-consume drink. To begin with, the ripped beans are selectively harvested. Then, the beans are put inside a depulper machine to be processed into a pulp. Once the pulp is ready, it is saved inside a fermenting tank. For this saving process, one to three days is needed. After that, the beans can be dried in a large space, before it is sorted by workers to filter the best beans in the sorter process. When the beans have completely sorted, it is burnt using a roaster. The result of this process then transforming into a smooth powder. The smooth powder is processed by using a grinder. After all these processes are finished, the beans are ready to be distributed as powdered coffee. The coffee is sent to any grocery stores by truck. Lastly, the coffee can be served as a beverage product.
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explains
the
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coffee
manufacturing the
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beans
into a consumable product. There were nine steps in manufacturing the
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beans
from harvesting until a ready-to-consume drink.

To
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begin
with, the ripped
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beans
are
selectively
harvested. Then, the
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beans
are put
inside a
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depulper
machine to
be processed
into a pulp. Once the pulp is ready, it
is saved
inside a fermenting tank. For this saving process, one to three days
is needed
. After that, the
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beans
can
be dried
in a large space,
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before
it
is sorted
by workers to filter the best
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beans
in the sorter process.

When the
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beans
have completely sorted, it
is burnt
using a roaster. The result of this process then transforming into a smooth powder. The smooth powder
is processed
by using a grinder.
After all
these processes
are finished
, the
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beans
are ready to
be distributed
as powdered
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coffee
. The
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coffee
is
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sent
to any grocery stores by truck.
Lastly
, the
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coffee
can
be served
as a beverage product.

IELTS academic The given diagram explains the coffee manufacturing the beans into a consumable product.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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