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The chart below shows the annual water usage by different industries.

The chart below shows the annual water usage by different industries. 6Obl
The bar chart gives comperation of the consumption of water annualy from public supply and grand water by various industries. Overall, it is clear that ground water usage was higher than public supply comsumption by all industries except machinery and food/ drink industry. The highest amound of ground water was used in chemicals industry 430 million cubic meters, it was almost twice the annual public supply water usage in chemicals industry which was 240 million cubic meters. While only 10 million cubic meters public supply water was used in textiles and fuel industries, ground water usage was much higher in these industries 80 million cubic meters and 70 million cubic meters respectively. The ground water consumption in the paper industry was 190 million cubic meters. On the other hand only 20 million cubic meters public supply water was used in the paper industry. The annual usage of ground water in the metal industry was 240 million cubic metres, while the annual public supply water consumption in the metal industry was only 90 million cubric metres. In contrast, while only 10 million cubric metres ground water was consumed in the machinery industry, the public supply water usage was 10 times higher. Likewise, 190 million cubic metres public supply water used in the food/drink industry, it was 80 million cubic metres higher than the ground water usage in same industry.
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comperation
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annualy
from
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public
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supply
and grand
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by various industries.

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, it is
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ground
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water
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usage
was higher than
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comsumption
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industries
except machinery and food/ drink industry.

The highest
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in chemicals
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430
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cubic
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, it was almost twice the annual
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public
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usage
in chemicals
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industry
which was 240
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in textiles and fuel
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industries
,
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was much higher in these
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respectively
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consumption in the paper
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was 190
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. The annual
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in the metal
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was 240
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