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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. B2eX
The given pictorial illustration depicts the process of electricity generation in the hydroelectric station. To commence with, it is a two-way process. In the day time, a large amount of stored water flows from a high-level reservoir supported by a dam towards the power station where reversible turbines are situated. These turbines force water to the low-level reservoir in order to generate electricity then with the help of the power cables, produced electricity supplied to the national grid. On the flip side, the used water which is collected in the low-level reservoir sent back to the high-level reservoir by the reversible turbines. The dam is open in the day time and closed at night time. All in all, the complete process includes two dams, a generator, reversible turbines and power lines. , but the reversible turbines play a major role in power production. As they operate generator in day time and pump water back to the high-lever reservoir in the night time.
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pictorial illustration depicts the process of electricity generation in the hydroelectric station.

To commence with, it is a two-way process. In the day
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, a large amount of stored
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water
flows from a high-level
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reservoir
supported by a dam towards the
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power
station where
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reversible
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turbines
are situated
. These
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turbines
force
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water
to the low-level
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reservoir
in order to generate electricity then with the
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help
of the
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cables, produced electricity supplied to the national grid.

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which
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in the low-level
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reservoir
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back to the high-level
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by the
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reversible
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turbines
. The dam is open in the day
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and closed at night
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. All in all, the complete process includes two dams, a generator,
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reversible
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turbines
and
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lines.
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play a major role in
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production. As they operate generator in day
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and pump
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water
back to the high-lever
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in the night
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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