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The graph below shows the price of apples and oranges between 1999 and 2003. Write a short report about the change in the price of apples and oranges shown in the graph.

The graph below shows the price of apples and oranges between 1999 and 2003. Write a short report about the change in the price of apples and oranges shown in the graph. gDMVO
The graph shows the price of Apples and Oranges per Kilo over a 4-year period from 1999 to 2003. Despite the price fluctuating quite a lot, apples finished the period costing much more than at the beginning, while oranges finished just a little more expensive than their initial price. In 1999 apples cost $5 per kilo, however, in the following year there was a drastic decrease in the price to only $1, the lowest price for apples over the whole period. Between 2000 and 2002 the price recovered to an extent, climbing from $1 to $3. In the last year of the period there was a sharp increase in the cost to $7, $2 more than at the start of the period. On the other hand, the price of oranges more or less followed the opposite trend. The price was low in 1999 at only $2. However, the following year it rose impressively to $5. Between 2000 and 2001 there was a steady increase in the cost to $6. This was the highest price that oranges achieved over the whole period. The following year the cost declined sharply to $3 and in the final year oranges lost another 50 cents in value to finish the period at $2. 50.
The graph
shows
the
price
of
Apples
and Oranges per Kilo over a
4-year
period
from 1999 to 2003. Despite the
price
fluctuating quite a lot,
apples
finished the
period
costing much more than at the beginning, while oranges finished
just
a
little
more expensive than their initial price.

In 1999
apples
cost
$5 per kilo,
however
, in the following
year
there was a drastic decrease in the
price
to
only
$1, the lowest
price
for
apples
over the whole
period
. Between 2000 and 2002 the
price
recovered to an extent, climbing from $1 to $3. In the last
year
of the
period
there was a sharp increase in the
cost
to $7, $2 more than at the
start
of the period.

On the other hand
, the
price
of oranges more or less followed the opposite trend. The
price
was low in 1999 at
only
$2.
However
, the following
year
it rose
impressively
to $5. Between 2000 and 2001 there was a steady increase in the
cost
to $6. This was the highest
price
that oranges achieved over the whole
period
. The following
year
the
cost
declined
sharply
to $3 and in the final
year
oranges lost another 50 cents in value to finish the
period
at $2. 50.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the price of apples and oranges between 1999 and 2003. Write a short report about the change in the price of apples and oranges shown in the graph.

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209 words
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