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THE BAR GRAPH BELOW SHOWS THE NUMBER OF TOURISTS VISITING TWO DIFFERENT CITIES BY SEASON. SUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAI FEATURE, AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT.

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IN 2006 THE NORTHEAST FAMILY'S OF SINGLE HOMES ARE 15000 BUT WE CAN SEE IT IS DECREASING REPIDILY IN UPCOMING YEARS. PEOPLE FROM SOUTH ARE ALSO DECREASING RAPEDILY, HOWEVER PEOPLE FROM MIDWEST ARE CONSTANT BUT THEY ARE ALSO ALSO NOT GROWING. IN 2010 PEOPLE FROM MISWEST, WEST, AND NORTHEAST ARE SAME AT 100, 000. AND AFTER THAT WEST PEOPLE ARE HAS SLIGHTLY INCREASED FROM 100, 000, BUT PEOPLE OF NORTHEAST ARE DRASTICALLY DECREASED. AS WE CAN SEE PEOPLE OF SOUTH ARE DOWN IN 2010 BUT THEY COVERD THERE VISITING. IN 2008 PEOPLE FROM WEST ARE NOT THAT MUCH DOWN AS PEOPLE OF MIDWEST, AND NORTHEAST ARE DOWN.
IN 2006 THE NORTHEAST FAMILY'S OF SINGLE HOMES ARE 15000
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IT IS DECREASING
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REPIDILY
IN UPCOMING YEARS.
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PEOPLE
FROM SOUTH ARE
ALSO
DECREASING
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RAPEDILY
,
HOWEVER
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PEOPLE
FROM MIDWEST ARE CONSTANT
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BUT
THEY ARE
ALSO
ALSO
NOT GROWING. IN 2010
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PEOPLE
FROM
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MISWEST
, WEST, AND NORTHEAST ARE SAME AT 100, 000. AND AFTER THAT WEST
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PEOPLE
ARE HAS
SLIGHTLY
INCREASED FROM 100, 000,
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BUT
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PEOPLE
OF NORTHEAST ARE
DRASTICALLY
DECREASED. AS WE CAN
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SEE
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PEOPLE
OF SOUTH ARE DOWN IN 2010
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BUT
THEY
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COVERD
THERE VISITING. IN 2008
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PEOPLE
FROM WEST ARE NOT THAT MUCH DOWN AS
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PEOPLE
OF MIDWEST, AND NORTHEAST ARE DOWN.
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IELTS academic THE BAR GRAPH BELOW SHOWS THE NUMBER OF TOURISTS VISITING TWO DIFFERENT CITIES BY SEASON.

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