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The table gives information about development of teacher salaries in five countries ( Australia, Belgium, Denmark, Japan and Portugal ); Since start their job to after 15 years and reach the maximum salary. Overall, the Australian teacher got the highest salary after that period and reached the maximum income short time. Whereas Denmark and Japan were similarly close. However the Belgium and Portugal were the lowest salaries in whole period.
The table gives information about development of teacher salaries in five countries
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Australia, Belgium, Denmark, Japan and Portugal
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the highest salary after that period and reached the maximum income short time. Whereas Denmark and Japan were
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the Belgium and Portugal were the lowest salaries in whole period.

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