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The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.

The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012. ymjr

The provided line graph illustrates the information about the population of four various turtles in India during the period of 22 years from 1980 to 2012. Overall, it can be seen that, the populates of turtles showed a similar index, while the figure of olive ridley turtles were higher than others. As clearly observed that, In 1980, leatherback turtles count were at equal point with others, whereas over the next 6 years, the number of turtles increased significantly up-to 105miliion, while the population of turtles faced some fluctuations and continousely went down to less than 60million at the end. Next to it, olive ridley turtles community showed gradual incline till the year 1998, however maximum count was recorded at 130 million. After that, some fluctuations were shown and reached at 115 million in the year 2012. Moving further, the community of all species were at the second highest position with 110 million in 1998 and took a nose dive in the next year. Moreover, count varied between 100 million to 105 million during the period between 1998 to 2002. Likewise, it stopped at the same level till the end of year 2008. From the year 2012, the population increased by 1million. Furthermore, the green turtles stood at the third highest native species which saw almost similar fluctuations with all species and also inclined as compared to given starting years.

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