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the chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008

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As a whole, it is vivid that, fruits and vegetables maximum was eaten by women in every day with five times. Moving back to details, in the year 2001 to 2003 12 percent pf young one ate fruit and vegetavles as same as 17% men consumed nutrients every day in same year while women percentage incline from 2001 to 2003 from 22 to 27. Further, men percentile increase in every year in 2004 -2006 with 20 percentage to 28% and little one percentage in 2004 was 17 which increased insteady till 2006with 22%. shifting toward the remaining information, after year 2006 women percenatge went downwards from 35 to 30 proportion. furthermore, in 2007 and 2008 men percentile was incline with 2%from chid in the ate fruit and vegetables
As a whole, it is vivid that, fruits and vegetables maximum
was eaten
by women in every day with five times.

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2001 to 2003 12 percent pf young one ate fruit and
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while women percentage incline from 2001 to 2003 from 22 to 27.
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in 2004 -2006 with 20 percentage to 28% and
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2006 women
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