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The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. 3N6X

The diagram here depicts the preparation of coffee and it’s process till dispatched. The first step is the farmer picking the coffee beans from the farm. Further the beans are allowed to dry by laying them. The beans are then roasted and then is cooled down instantly. Soon, the beans are grinded using a grinder. Moreover, the beans are then mixed with the hot water and a mixture is prepared and then they are strained with the help of a sieve. Placing the mixture in a cool environment to freeze it is then grinded again. Drying the beans again in a vacuum it is then packed into the jars and are dispatched to their following locations for factories. Overall, from starting from picking the seeds of coffee and delivering it to the market involes the steps of drying and cooling alongwith freezing it and grinding into small parts to form a mixture and again drying to avoid it being moist and finally dispatching it.

The diagram here depicts the preparation of coffee and it’s process till dispatched.

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beans
 from the farm. Further
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beans
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allowed
 to dry by laying them. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 are then roasted and then is cooled
 down instantly
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Soon
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 are Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "ground", the past tense form of the verb 'grind'?groundgrindergrinned
grinded
 using a grinder.

Moreover
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 are then mixed with the hot water and a mixture is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).prepared, and
prepared and
 then they are strained
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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 of a sieve. Placing the mixture in a cool environment to freeze it is then Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "ground", the past tense form of the verb 'grind'?groundgrindergrinned
grinded
 again. Drying the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 again in a vacuum it is then packed into the jars and are dispatched
 to their following locations for factories.

Overall
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 the steps of drying and cooling Possible spelling mistake found.along with
alongwith
 freezing it and grinding into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 parts to form a mixture and again drying to avoid it being moist and finally
 dispatching it. 