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The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. 3N6X
The diagram here depicts the preparation of coffee and it’s process till dispatched. The first step is the farmer picking the coffee beans from the farm. Further the beans are allowed to dry by laying them. The beans are then roasted and then is cooled down instantly. Soon, the beans are grinded using a grinder. Moreover, the beans are then mixed with the hot water and a mixture is prepared and then they are strained with the help of a sieve. Placing the mixture in a cool environment to freeze it is then grinded again. Drying the beans again in a vacuum it is then packed into the jars and are dispatched to their following locations for factories. Overall, from starting from picking the seeds of coffee and delivering it to the market involes the steps of drying and cooling alongwith freezing it and grinding into small parts to form a mixture and again drying to avoid it being moist and finally dispatching it.
The diagram here depicts the preparation of coffee and it’s process till dispatched.

The
first
step is the farmer picking the coffee
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beans
from the farm.
Further
the
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beans
are
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allowed
to dry by laying them. The
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beans
are then roasted and then
is cooled
down
instantly
.
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Soon
, the
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beans
are
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grinded
using a grinder.

Moreover
, the
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beans
are then mixed with the hot water and a mixture is
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prepared and
then they
are strained
with the
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help
of a sieve. Placing the mixture in a cool environment to freeze it is then
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grinded
again. Drying the
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beans
again in a vacuum it is then packed into the jars and
are dispatched
to their following locations for factories.

Overall
, from starting from picking the seeds of coffee and delivering it to the market
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involes
the steps of drying and cooling
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alongwith
freezing it and grinding into
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small
parts to form a mixture and again drying to avoid it being moist and
finally
dispatching it.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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