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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. A1d3
The graph illustrate the amount of enquiries sent to one city's Tourist Information Office during a semester from January to June of 2011. Overall, it is clear that took in person the enquiry has got a steep increase during the period. Contrarily sent it by email or letter had a gradual decline with the following of mounths. Also comunicating with telephone got a total rise at the and of the six mounths. The most significant grown of number of enquiries is made by personal sent, indeed in January there were up to 400 applications and at the and of the period them were about 1900. Also enquiries communicated by phone at the and of the period were popular with roughly a number of 1600. Although this method started whith a steady andament with fluctuation between 800 and 1000. Despite all the other methods got more used sending answers by letters or emails had a dip In fact, after a stable start neat the number of 700 after march the number felt down dropping under 400 in May. In conclusion this parameter stayed stable in the last mounth of the period.
The graph
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the amount of
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sent
to one city's Tourist Information Office during a semester from January to
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June of 2011
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, it is
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clear
that took in person the
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enquiry
has
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a steep increase during the
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period
.
Contrarily
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sent
it by email or letter had a gradual decline with the following of
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mounths
.
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Also
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comunicating
with telephone
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got
a total rise at the
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and
of the six
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mounths
.

The most significant grown of
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number
of
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enquiries
is made
by personal
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sent
,
indeed
in January there were up to 400 applications and at the
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and
of the
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period
them were about 1900.
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Also
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enquiries
communicated by phone at the
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and
of the
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period
were popular with roughly a
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number
of 1600. Although this method
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started
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whith
a steady
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andament
with fluctuation between 800 and 1000.

Despite all the other methods
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got
more
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used
sending answers by letters or emails had a dip In fact, after a stable
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start
neat the
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number
of 700 after
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march
the
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felt down dropping under 400 in May.
In conclusion
this parameter stayed stable in the last
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mounth
of the
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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