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The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

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The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collects rainwater to process in order to use as drinking water. Overal rainwater collected from houses can be used for drinking after it has been processed by being filtered and then being treated with chemicals. Initially, the rain which falls orn the rooftop is collected by the gutter and then runs down the pipe at the side of the house into the drain at the bottom. Each house collects rainwater in this way and the rainwater is then passed along underground drains to the water filter The ranywater passes through the wate filter to remove any impurities. Once it has been fltered, it continues along the pipes to a storage tank. From this point, the water goes from storage to the wate treatment At his stage o1 the process, the ater 1s treated with dhemicals in order to make it nt for consumption. When the water is ready for drinking, it travels along pipes that lead back into the houses in the town where people can use the water for daily consumption.
The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collects
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rainwater
to process in

order to
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use
as drinking water.
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Overal
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rainwater
collected from
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houses
can be

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used
for drinking after it has
been processed
by
being filtered
and then
being treated
with chemicals.

Initially
, the rain which falls
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orn
the rooftop
is collected
by the gutter and then runs

down the pipe at the side of the
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house
into the drain at the bottom. Each
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house


collects
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rainwater
in this way and the
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rainwater
is then passed along underground

drains to the water filter

The
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ranywater
passes through the
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wate
filter to remove any impurities. Once it has

been
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fltered
, it continues along the pipes to a storage tank. From this point, the

water goes from storage to the
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wate
treatment At his stage o1 the process, the

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ater
1s treated with
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dhemicals
in order to
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make
it
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nt
for consumption. When the

water is ready for drinking, it travels along pipes that lead back into the
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houses
in

the town where
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people
can
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use
the water for daily consumption.

IELTS academic The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

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