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The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.

The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. 566Xm

A glance on the graph provided reveals information about part-time workers in each part of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010 in percent. It can be clearly seen that the percentage of part-time workers in England and Wales was higher than in Northern Ireland and Scotland in both periods of time 1980 and 2010. According to the data, the amount of part-time working people rose in three countries of the UK: in England, in Scotland and in Wales and grew to approximately 6%, 9% and 2% respectively in 2010. In contrast in Northern Ireland the percentage fell to 3% approximately in 2010. The other striking feature of the graph is that Wales had the highest number of people who did not work full time. In 1980 Scotland had the lowest rate of part-time workers then there was a shift and in 2010 the lowest percentage was in Northern Ireland.

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 that the percentage of part-time workers in England and Wales was higher than in Northern Ireland and Scotland in both periods of time 1980 and 2010.

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 in Northern Ireland the percentage fell to 3% approximately in 2010.

The other striking feature of the graph is that Wales had the highest number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 who did not work full time. In 1980 Scotland had the lowest rate of part-time workers then there was a shift and in 2010 the lowest percentage was in Northern Ireland. 