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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates the number of people graduated from the universities in Canada from the year 1992 to 2007. It signifies the comparison of both male and female students graduating from Canadian universities and emphasising on the gradution rate increase in Canada. The line remains constant from the year 1992 to 2000. Only around seventy hundred male students and one hundred students were graduating till 2000. It is evident from the graph that the number of students getting graduated from univerisites gradually increased from the year 2000 onwards. It is significant that a maximum of 150000 female students graduated in the year 2006 whereas only around one hundred thousand male students graduated in the same year. Hence, it is proven that more female students are interested in graduating from Canadian universities compared to male students.
The graph illustrates the number of
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graduated from the universities in Canada from the
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1992 to 2007. It signifies the comparison of both male and female
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students
graduating from Canadian universities and
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on the
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gradution
rate increase in Canada.

The line remains constant from the
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year
1992 to 2000.
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Only
around seventy hundred male
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students
and one hundred
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students
were graduating till 2000.

It is evident from the graph that the number of
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students
getting graduated from
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univerisites
gradually
increased from the
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year
2000 onwards. It is significant that a maximum of 150000 female
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students
graduated in the
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year
2006 whereas
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only
around one hundred thousand male
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students
graduated in the same
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year
.
Hence
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is proven
that more female
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students
are interested
in graduating from Canadian universities compared to male
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students
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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