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The line graph describes the data of visitors visiting Caribean Island since the year of 2010 until 2017

The line graph describes the data of visitors visiting Caribean Island since the year of 2010 until 2017 XWkY
The line graph describes the data of visitors visiting Caribean Island since the year of 2010 until 2017. Overall, the total of visitors increased during the observed years, although in the last year visitors who stay on cruise ships became more prominent than the others that stay on island. In 2010, about a quarter million visitors in Caribean Island stayed on cruise ships and about three-quarter million stayed on island. In 2011, the total number of visitors who stayed on island remained the same, while the visitors who stayed on cruise ship increased to half million. After that, the number of visitors stayed on cruise ships decreased to as it was in 2010, but then rose continuesly until reaching the peak in 2017 with the total of 2 millions. In contrast, the number of visitors stayed on island rose until reached its peak in 2013 with the total number of 1. 5 million, but then remained the same until 2015. After that it dropped to 1. 25 million in 2016 and rose slightly to 1. 5 million in the last observed year. In addition, the trends also shows that the number of visitors stayed in cruise ships overtaken the number of visitors stayed on island in between 2015 and 2016.
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Caribean
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Island
since the year of 2010 until 2017.
Overall
, the
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of
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visitors
increased during the observed years, although in the last year
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visitors
who stay on
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cruise
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ships
became more prominent than the others that stay on island.

In 2010, about a quarter
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million
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visitors
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Caribean
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Island
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stayed
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cruise
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ships
and about three-quarter
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million
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. In 2011, the
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remained the same, while the
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increased to half
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million
. After that, the
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visitors
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ships
decreased to as it was in 2010,
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of 2 millions.

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rose until reached its peak in 2013 with the
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in 2016 and rose
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in the last observed year.

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IELTS academic The line graph describes the data of visitors visiting Caribean Island since the year of 2010 until 2017

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