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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line chart below presents the number of male and female students who graduated from the unviversity of Canada during the period between 1992 and 2007. It is clear that the rate of men and women graduates increased gradually through the passage of time. According to what is shown, the proportion of female graduates is more higher than the males in 1992 since 100, 000 female students gradued at that time, whereas only 70, 000 male students graduated in the same year. Then, during the period of 8 years, it has been noticed that the gap between the two proportions widened due to the rate of the female graduate incleased dramatically, while the percentage of the male graduates raised slightly. To sum up, we could say that the number of graduates in Canada, including males and females, was going up, but it is obvious that the rate of males is lower than the females.
The line chart below presents the number of male and
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female
students who graduated from the
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unviversity
of Canada during the period between 1992 and 2007. It is
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clear
that the rate of
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men
and women
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graduates
increased
gradually
through the passage of time.

According to what
is shown
, the proportion of
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female
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graduates
is
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more higher
than the
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males
in 1992 since 100, 000
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female
students
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gradued
at that time, whereas
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only
70, 000 male students graduated in the same year. Then, during the period of 8 years, it has
been noticed
that the gap between the two proportions widened due to the rate of the
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female
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graduate
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incleased
dramatically
, while the percentage of the male
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graduates
raised
slightly
.

To sum up, we could say that the number of
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graduates
in Canada, including
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males
and
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females
, was going up,
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but
it is obvious that the rate of
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males
is lower than the
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females
.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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