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The graph below shows the interest of households in possess and hired asylum in English and Wales numerous 1918 and 2011.

The graph below shows the interest of households in possess and hired asylum in English and Wales numerous 1918 and 2011. Imprimis, the households in owned accommodation are growth and an improvement. The households in rented accommodation are slide. The discrepancy among the graph is that the highest format occurred in 1918 and the lowest result occurred in 1918. Overall there has been a decline in this table. The households in owned accommodation are deterioration than in rented accommodation in 1918. In 1918 years owned accommodation are climb than 1918, but rented accommodation are dip than 1918 The households in owned accommodation are growing until 2001. The households in rented accommodation are plunge ere 2001. Moreover by 2001 owned accommodation go up. Furthermore rented accommodation by 2001, it will drop slightly. In the 2011, owned accommodation are double than rented accommodation.
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in possess and hired asylum in English and Wales numerous 1918 and 2011.

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in
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are growth and an improvement. The
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in rented
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are slide.

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The
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in
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owned
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are deterioration than in rented
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in 1918.

In 1918 years
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are climb than 1918,
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rented
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are dip than 1918

The
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in
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are growing until 2001.

The
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in rented
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are plunge ere 2001.

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by 2001
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go up.

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by 2001, it will drop
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In the 2011,
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are double than rented
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the interest of households in possess and hired asylum in English and Wales numerous 1918 and 2011.

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