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The diagram shows the changes in the layout of Woodwards University from 1985 till now

the map charts illustrates the elements in the layout of Woodwards University from 1985 till now. overall, it can be seen, that the layout of woodwords University has been transformed completely. as, new facilities are added at present. to embark with, in 1985, there was a library in the Northwest. near the library, a Physics block were constructed in the north direction. moreover, in the north east side there was a chemistry block. as well as, a car park there was a Biology block. the car park was joined with the road. a admin building was built in the south east side. On the opposite side of admin building, a car park set up
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the
map charts illustrates the elements in the layout of
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Woodwards
University from 1985 till
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now
.
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overall
, it can be
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seen
, that the layout of
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woodwords
University has
been transformed
completely.
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as
, new facilities are
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added
at present.
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to
embark with, in 1985, there was a library in the Northwest.
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near
the library, a Physics block
were constructed
in the north direction.
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moreover
, in the
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north east
side there was a chemistry block.
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as
well as, a car park there was a Biology block.
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the
car park was
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joined
with the road.
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a
admin building
was built
in the
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south east
side. On the opposite side of admin building, a car park set
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the changes in the layout of Woodwards University from 1985 till now

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