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The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019.

The given bar chart illustrates why the workers prefer to work from home, while the table compares the amount of work by men and women weekly in the year 2019. Overall, it is clear that genders choose to work from home to save money, and the heights number of men working from home over 30 hours each week will this figure is high for female who works under 10 hours weekly in 2019. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see in 2019, over 40% of gender want to work from home to save money, while around 24% of men and 11% of women choose work from home rather than an office because of more production. However, females more than men preferred work at home due to looking after their children easily. Only 3% of male worked from home under 10 hours weekly, however this figure is high for female is around 74%. The number of workers who work in home between 10 and 30 hours is close almost 16% and 22% for women and men respectively. But number of man workers who worked over 30 hours weekly is much higher around 81% than women with only 6%.
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and
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in the year 2019.

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that genders choose to
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from home to save money, and the heights number of
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working from home over 30
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each week will this figure is high for female who works under 10
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in 2019.

Looking at the information in more detail, we can
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in 2019, over 40% of gender want to
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from home to save money, while around 24% of
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men
and 11% of
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women
choose
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work
from home
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of more production.
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preferred
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at home due to looking after their children
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3% of male worked from home under 10
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,
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this figure is high for female is around 74%. The number of workers who
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in home between 10 and 30
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is close almost 16% and 22% for
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women
and
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men
respectively
.
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number of
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workers who worked over 30
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is much higher around 81% than
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with
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6%.

IELTS academic The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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