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The graph below shows the households owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales 1918 to 2011

The graph below shows the households owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales 1918 to 2011. It is a obvious from the graph that the rented to the households. The rented to the households started a just below rise in 1918 year and then the households rented fell slightly to 10 percent in 1939 year. And then the rented to the households are very decrease to 30 percent in 2001 year. but in 2011 year the rented the households are a bit of a surge to 37 percent. The owned to the households is an escalation. The owned the households are very dive. In 1918 year the owned is a very fall. but then owned the households is step by step a rise. And then owned is a double of in 1981 year. But then the owned is very boom in 2001 year. It is a very recover.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the households owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales 1918 to 2011

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