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The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. WJdq
the line graph illustrate how the tourist are visiting a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. In 2010, visitors staying on Cruise ship was. 0. 25 million. It was fluctuated from 2010 to 2013 Between 0. 25 and 0. 50 million. However, it was gradually increased from 1 million to 2 millions between following year 2014 and 2017. On the other hand, the line chart shows 0. 75million visitors staying on island in 2010 and it was constant till 2011. Though the graph reveals the line dropped in 2016 whether 2013-2017 was unchanged by 1. 5 million visitors number. Overall, the total visitors was sharply increased 2010 to 2015 and the visitors number was constant on 2016. Moreover, it was boom from 3million to 3. 5 millions on 2017.
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line graph illustrate how the tourist are visiting a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. In 2010,
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visitors
staying on Cruise ship was. 0. 25
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million
. It
was fluctuated
from 2010 to 2013 Between 0. 25 and 0. 50
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million
.
However
, it was
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increased from 1
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million
to 2
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millions
between following year 2014 and 2017.
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, the line chart
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0.
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75million
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visitors
staying on island in 2010 and it was constant till 2011. Though the graph reveals the line dropped in 2016 whether 2013-2017
was unchanged
by 1. 5
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million
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visitors
number.
Overall
, the total
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visitors
was
sharply
increased 2010 to 2015 and the
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visitors
number was constant on 2016.
Moreover
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boom
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3million
to 3. 5
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on 2017.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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