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The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The flow chart shows what consequences arise when deforestation occurs. Cutting trees down lead to four major effects, eventually results in floods, degraded vegetation and loss of biodiversity. One of the immediate effects is the compression of the soil by heavy logging equipment which contributes land to be hard and 'baked'. As a result, Rain water runs off and causes flooding in that area. Another consequence is the problem which land has no longer tree roots to hold a upper soil together. Consequently, the top soil faces erosion which lead pioneer speacices to move in and vegetation to degrade. The logging also results an increase burning risk (can be either deliberately or accidentally). Microorganisms lose the food in waste which is destroyed by logging, therefore, this is followed by decrease in diversity of plants and degraded vegetation. Last effect is that air can't get enough moisture from the plants, so that, it leads to lessen precipitation, as well as intense drought. The consequence, once more, come with the outcome of degraded vegetation and loss of biodiversity.
The flow chart
shows
what consequences arise when deforestation occurs. Cutting trees down lead to four major effects,
eventually
results in floods, degraded vegetation and loss of biodiversity.

One of the immediate effects is the compression of the soil by heavy logging equipment which contributes land to be
hard
and 'baked'.
As a result
, Rain water runs off and causes flooding in that area.

Another consequence is the problem which land has no longer tree roots to hold
a
upper soil together.
Consequently
, the top soil faces erosion which lead pioneer
speacices
to
move
in and vegetation to degrade.

The logging
also
results an increase burning
risk
(can be either
deliberately
or
accidentally
). Microorganisms lose the food in waste which is
destroyed
by logging,
therefore
, this
is followed
by decrease in diversity of plants and degraded vegetation.

Last effect is that air can't
get
enough
moisture from the plants,
so
that, it leads to lessen precipitation,
as well
as intense drought. The consequence, once more,
come
with the outcome of degraded vegetation and loss of biodiversity.
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IELTS academic The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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