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The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink , housing ,clothing and entertainment .

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. mKbK
The given tabular chart depicts the information regarding monthly earnings spending on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment in five different European countries. The data is calculated in percentage. Overall, all five countries spending was the maximum in food and drinks and housing, while all countries spend the least earnings in clothing and entertainment sector. Getting into details, the spending of France, Germany and UK in food and drink was 25%, 22% and 27% respectively. In contrast, Turkey and Spain spend more than 30% earnings in food and drinks. In case of housing, expenditure of Turkey and Spain was near about one-tenth, although in France, Germany and UK spending made on housing was approximately one third. On the contrary, expenditure of France and Spain in clothing was same at 8%. In Germany, UK and Turkey, spendings on clothing was 15%, 11% and 12% respectively. In case of entertainment, one fifth of salary was spend by Germany. In Turkey and UK, expenditure was nearly one tenth. Spending of France and Spain was 3% more than UK and Turkey.
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tabular chart depicts the information regarding monthly earnings
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spending
on
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food
and
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drink
, housing, clothing and entertainment in five
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different
European countries. The data
is calculated
in percentage.
Overall
, all five countries
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spending
was the maximum in
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food
and
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drinks
and housing, while all countries spend the least earnings in clothing and entertainment sector. Getting into
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details
, the
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spending
of France, Germany and UK in
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food
and
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drink
was 25%, 22% and 27%
respectively
.
In contrast
, Turkey and Spain spend more than 30% earnings in
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food
and
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drinks
. In case of housing, expenditure of Turkey and Spain was near about one-tenth, although in France, Germany and UK
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spending
made on housing was approximately one third.
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, expenditure of France and Spain in clothing was same at 8%. In Germany, UK and Turkey,
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spendings on
clothing was 15%, 11% and 12%
respectively
. In case of entertainment, one fifth of salary was
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spend
by Germany.
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In
Turkey and UK, expenditure was
nearly
one tenth.
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Spending
of France and Spain was 3% more than UK and Turkey.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

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