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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. 2jlx
The graph illustrates the quantity of waste produced by company А, company B and company C between the year of 2000 and 2015. Overall the most striking feature of the graph is that the waste production of company A has gradually decreased throughout the period on contrast, the waste output of company c has considerably increased during the 15 years. A glance at the graph, in 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while company B produced 8 tones and company c produced 4 tonnes of waste respectively. In the next five years, company A observed a reduction of 1 tonn in the waste output, on the other hand company B was at the peak (10 tonnes) and the junk output of company C has been increased to 6 tonnes. Considering the other factors, the waste production of company A has been plunged to 9 tonnes in 2010 which has even been declined (10 tonnes) in the next five years. While company B and company C were produced 7 tonnes of waste material in 2010. Although, company B observed cut down in amount of waste in 2015 whereas company C faced steap raise in junk material in the next five years.
The graph illustrates the quantity of
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by
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А,
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B and
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C between the
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year
of 2000 and 2015.

Overall
the most striking feature of the graph is that the
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waste
production of
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company
A has
gradually
decreased throughout the period on contrast, the
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output of
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company
c has
considerably
increased during the 15 years.

A glance at the graph, in 2000,
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company
A
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produced
12 tonnes of
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waste
, while
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company
B
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produced
8 tones and
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company
c
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produced
4 tonnes of
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waste
respectively
. In the
next
five years,
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company
A observed a reduction of 1
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tonn
in the
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output,
on the other hand
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B was at the peak (10 tonnes) and the junk output of
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company
C has
been increased
to 6 tonnes.

Considering the other factors, the
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waste
production of
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company
A has
been plunged
to 9 tonnes in 2010 which has even
been declined
(10 tonnes) in the
next
five years. While
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company
B and
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company
C were
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produced
7 tonnes of
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waste
material in 2010. Although,
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company
B observed
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in 2015 whereas
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company
C faced
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steap
raise in junk material in the
next
five years.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

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