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The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided bar chart presents the percentage of various age groups in the UK, who used the internet, which was consumed 4 years, in between 2003 and 2004. Overall the period, it can clearly see that 16-24 age group were highest, whereas the over 65’s had the least percentage of internet users. Interestingly, all age groups experienced an upward trend as far as their daily use of the internet. Looking at the graph in more detail, in 2003 and 2004, the age group of 16-25 used 80%. In 2005, this figure increased significantly to 100%, but in 2006, decreased to 90%. In the 25-44 age group of ratio, increased significantly, in 2003 approximately 50% people were used, whereas percentage increased with 80% in 2006. There were drafting changed in the 55-64 age ratio it starts with around 30% and gradually grew and reached approximately 50%. In 2003, as far the over 65-year-olds were not using the internet but 19% used in 2004 and 2005, this figure increased with 20% in 2006.
The provided bar chart presents the percentage of various
age
groups
in the UK, who
used
the internet, which
was consumed
4 years, in between 2003 and 2004.

Overall
the period, it can
clearly
see
that 16-24
age
group
were highest, whereas the over 65’s had the least percentage of internet users.
Interestingly
, all
age
groups
experienced an upward trend as far as their daily
use
of the internet.

Looking at the graph in more detail, in 2003 and 2004, the
age
group
of 16-25
used
80%. In 2005, this figure
increased
significantly
to 100%,
but
in 2006, decreased to 90%. In the 25-44
age
group
of ratio,
increased
significantly
, in 2003 approximately 50%
people
were
used
, whereas percentage
increased
with 80% in 2006. There were drafting
changed
in the 55-64
age
ratio it
starts
with around 30% and
gradually
grew and reached approximately 50%. In 2003, as far the over 65-year-olds were not using the internet
but
19%
used
in 2004 and 2005, this figure
increased
with 20% in 2006.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006.

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