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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The information given by the table is about the proportion of buyer consumption of three different categories of items in five countries in 2002. Overall, it can be seen that food, drinks and tobacco had the highest figures while leisure and education had the lowest one. It can be seen from the table that people in Turkey spent the most on buying food, drinks and tobacco at 32, 14% and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The consumption of food, drinks and tobacco in Italy was slightly higher than Sweden, at 16, 36% and 15, 77% respectively. In Spain, consumer expenditure on food, drinks and tobacco was approximately 19%. For clothing and footwear, the expenditure was less than other countries with 5. 4% as opposed to the highest spending in Italy, at 9% while other three countries only took up around 6. 5%. The lowest spending was on leisure and education, which accounted for under 5% in all countries. Turkey spent most on these services, at 4, 35%. By contrast, people in Spain spent less than 2%. The other three countries paid from 2. 2% to 3. 2% for leisure and education.
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had the highest figures while leisure and education had the lowest one.

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at 32, 14% and Ireland, at
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in Italy was
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was approximately 19%.

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took up around 6. 5%. The lowest spending was on leisure and education, which accounted for under 5% in all
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in Spain spent less than 2%. The other three
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paid from 2. 2% to 3. 2% for leisure and education.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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