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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph displays quantity of tourists which were visited a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. The horizontal side shows times and the vertical side preset millions of visitors from zero to four. There are three lines the first shows visitors which staying on cruise ships, the second line is visitors staying on island, and the third one is amount of these two lines. Total amount of visitors from 2010 to 2015 is rise significantly from one million to 2, 7 and from 2015 to 2016 it fixed and after 2016 it continued increase and reach a peck in 2017 3, 5 million tourists. Visitors staying on islands from 2010 to 2011 have same quantity approximately 0, 7million, after that this data enlarged till 1, 5 million in 2013 and fixed from 2013 to 2015, from 2015 to 2016 it is decreased but in 2017 it reached the same as in 2015. Visitors who prefer staying on island from 2010 to 2012 is hesitated and from 2012 to 2017 it essential ascend and reach a high level in 2017 2 million. Compare to visitors staying on cruise ships and visitors staying on island we can mention that from 2010 to middle of the 2015 to 2016 visitors most part staid in hotels but after middle of the 2015 to 2016 it changes
The graph displays quantity of tourists which
were visited
a Caribbean
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island
from 2010 to 2017. The horizontal side
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shows
times and the vertical side preset
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millions
of
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visitors
from zero to four. There are three lines the
first
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shows
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visitors
which
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staying
on cruise ships, the second line is
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visitors
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staying
on
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island
, and the third one is
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amount
of these two lines.

Total amount of
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visitors
from 2010 to 2015 is rise
significantly
from one
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million
to 2, 7 and from 2015 to 2016 it
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fixed
and after 2016 it continued increase and reach a peck in 2017 3, 5
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million
tourists.

Visitors
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staying
on
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islands
from 2010 to 2011 have same quantity approximately 0,
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7million
, after that this data enlarged till 1, 5
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million
in 2013 and
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fixed
from 2013 to 2015, from 2015 to 2016 it
is decreased
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but
in 2017 it reached the same as in 2015.
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Visitors
who prefer
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staying
on
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island
from 2010 to 2012
is hesitated
and from 2012 to 2017
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it essential
ascend and reach a high level in 2017 2 million.

Compare to
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships and
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visitors
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staying
on
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island
we can mention that from 2010 to middle of the 2015 to 2016
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visitors
most part staid in hotels
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but
after middle of the 2015 to 2016 it
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changes
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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221 words
6.0
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