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many countries promote tourism .why? what do u this how does it benefit?

Tourism has enabled people from various countries to experience the unprecedented exposure to every corner of the world; various counties, which are on the path of development, prefer to promote this activity in their own territory. The reason that advocate this interest, along with my own perspective regarding its impact will be discussed in forthcoming paragraphs. To embark on, an economy of a country dwell on proliferation; owing to this, tourism act as step ladder that helps in upliftment of the economy as it leads to a continuous inflow of foreign currency. For instance, primary sector in Switzerland is tourism; economy of this county is maintained through the money that people, from all over the world, spend to explore it. Hence, economy of a country is the primary reason to enhance tourism. Moreover, employment rate is increased; many multilingual people that have good communication skills are hired to act as guide for the people from the abroad to make them understand the history or information behind every tourist spot. It is my considered opinion that tourism benefits the country and its citizens a lot. To illustrate, people from another culture background gets introduced with rich culture of people belonging to the country they visit; it helps to mark presence of country on the map; economy and employment rate is increased as discussed above. In the light of above facts, it can be asserted that emphasizing on tourism is a right step for any developing country.

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