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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The line graph illustrates the amounts of visitors traveling a Caribbean island from the years 2010 to 2017. Overall, both numbers of visitors staying on cruise ships and islands were a substantial increase up to 3. 5 million in total in the last year, except for a brief plateau of around 2. 7 million in 2015. In the terms of staying on cruise ships which starting the period with the lowest amounts of tourists in 2010, only a quarter million. Then, there was a fluctuation in the two following years variating around 500 thousand. In 2013, the number of travelers rose significantly and reached its highest point at 2 million visitors by 2017. The number of visitors staying on the island remained relatively constant from 2010 to 2011 at three-quarter million. The trend grew continuedly to 2013 which reached the largest amounts of visitors around 1. 5 million and stayed stable until 2015. Unfortunately, a slight decrease in the year 2016, fell to 1. 25 million. Finally, in 2017, it rose to the same amounts as travelers in 2015 around 1. 5 million visitors.
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traveling a Caribbean island from the years 2010 to 2017.

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staying on cruise ships and islands were a substantial increase up to 3. 5
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million
in total in the last
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,
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in 2015.

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of tourists in 2010,
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. Then, there was a fluctuation in the two following years
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500 thousand. In 2013, the number of travelers rose
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by 2017.

The number of
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staying on the island remained
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. The trend grew
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to 2013 which reached the largest
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and stayed stable until 2015. Unfortunately, a slight decrease in the
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2016, fell to 1. 25
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, in 2017, it rose to the same
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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