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The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates the stages of water supply that use in Australia nowadays as well as in future. Overall, there are three main types of water shown on the diagram, namely, pure water, storm water and waste water. It can be see that three conditions on diagram, water delivering to consumers, treat the waste water and sent storm water to river. Firstly, the water storage place called dam delivers pure water to many consumers like residential areas, industries, and business. The pure water is illustrated by narrow black arrow. The waste water, represents with black arrow shown on the diagram, release from dam as well as city sent back to water treatment plant in order to purify the water. Finally, the storm water from city will reach to river as a final process.
The diagram illustrates the stages of
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supply that
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use
in Australia nowadays
as well
as
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in future
.

Overall
, there are three main types of
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water
shown on the diagram,
namely
, pure
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, storm
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and waste
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water
. It can be
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see
that three conditions on diagram,
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delivering to consumers, treat the waste
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water
and
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sent
storm
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to river.

Firstly
, the
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storage place called dam delivers pure
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water
to
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many
consumers like residential areas, industries, and business. The pure
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water
is illustrated
by narrow black arrow. The waste
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, represents with black arrow shown on the diagram, release from dam
as well
as city
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sent
back to
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treatment plant in order to purify the
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.
Finally
, the storm
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from city will reach to river as a final process.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
133 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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