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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. 0QXQ
The provided line graph illustrates the amount of visitors who went to a Carribean island by staying on cruise ships, island as well as total between 2010 and 2017. To begin with, tourist who stayed on cruise ships were 0. 2 m in 2010 which rose in following year and reached at 0. 5m. This trend shows slight declination in 2012 and after that, it constantly increased till 2017 and reached at 2m. Discussing the people who stayed on island, 0. 7m people are visit the carrabian island in 2010. It stayed constant until it rose dramatically in 2012 and reached at 1. 3m. After that point, it slightly increased in 2013 and stayed constant till 2015 at 1. 5m which is highest for this situation. After a fluctuation, it again peaked to 2m in 2017. Apart from these trends, total numbers of travellers also started at lowest point 1m in 2010 which showed noticable incremation in number till 2015 and reached at 2. 8m. This trend showed consistency in next year. After 2016, it significantly increase to 3. 5m in 2017. Oveall, it can be seen that all three trends are started at lowest point of each and after some fluctuation, it finished at their highest point.
The provided line graph illustrates the amount of visitors who went to a
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Carribean
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by staying on cruise ships,
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island
as well
as total between 2010 and 2017.

To
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with, tourist who
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stayed
on cruise ships were 0. 2 m in 2010 which rose in following year and
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5m
. This
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trend
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slight declination in 2012 and after that, it
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increased till 2017 and
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reached
at
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2m
.

Discussing the
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island
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7m
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people
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carrabian
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island
in 2010. It
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3m
. After that
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, it
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constant till 2015 at 1.
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5m
which is highest for this situation. After a fluctuation, it again peaked to
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2m
in 2017.

Apart from these
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1m
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showed
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noticable
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8m
. This
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showed
consistency in
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5m
in 2017.

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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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