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The graph below shows the number of tourists visited Tashkent from three countries during 1993- 2018

The graph below shows the number of tourists visited Tashkent from three countries during 1993- 2018 KGy79
Given is a line graph comoaring and contrasting the alternations in the number of tripper visited Tashkent from UK, France and India between 1993 and 2018. As is apparent, although UK ranked the first step, the trend of the visitors decreased end of the period. However, trend of the France trippers was increased and number of India torists almost remain steadily throughuot the period. As for UK at the beginning of the period number of torists went down from 1993 to 1998. There was a significantly went up from 1999 to 2003. Having considerable dip between 2003 and 2008. During the end of the period within two years there was a fluctuation and reached 2 million. When it comes to France, initialliy, remaind the same level in the first decade. There was a noticable rise next half decade the tendency of tourists dropped. At the end of the period trend of the trippers significantly went up. Turning to the details of India, as soon as its trend remained constant at 2. 5 millon, it decreased and reached at 2 million in 2003. During the end of the interval the tendency of India visitors declined with same level from 2003 to end of the information
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comoaring
and contrasting the alternations in the number of tripper visited Tashkent from UK, France and India between 1993 and 2018. As is apparent, although UK ranked the
first
step, the
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of the visitors decreased
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.
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of the France trippers
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torists
almost remain
steadily
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number of
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went down from 1993 to 1998. There was a
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within two years there was a fluctuation and reached 2 million. When it
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half decade the tendency of tourists dropped. At the
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of India, as
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remained constant at 2. 5
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of the interval the tendency of India visitors declined with same level from 2003 to
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visited Tashkent from three countries during 1993- 2018

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