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The comparison between 4 groups of age in milk and butter weekly consumption in a European country are illustrated in the table.

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The comparison between 4 groups of age in milk and butter weekly consumption in a European country are illustrated in the table. Overall, in term of milk, the older the more amount of milk a person drinks per week, more than half people under 25 are big on the full fat milk. In addition, the 45-65 years old people consume more butter than 3 other groups. When looking at milk consumption of under 25 years old people, they only drink 1200ml a week and 59% of them choose full fat milk. Moreover, 1650ml of milk are
The comparison between 4 groups of age in
milk
and butter weekly consumption in a European country
are illustrated
in the table.
Overall
, in term of
milk
, the older the more amount of
milk
a person drinks per week, more than half
people
under 25 are
big
on the full
fat
milk
.
In addition
, the 45-65 years
old
people
consume more butter than 3 other groups.

When looking at
milk
consumption of under 25 years
old
people
, they
only
drink 1200ml a week and 59% of them choose full
fat
milk
.
Moreover
, 1650ml of
milk
are
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IELTS academic The comparison between 4 groups of age in milk and butter weekly consumption in a European country are illustrated in the table.

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