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the graphs below show the growth in wages within the G7 nations between 2000-2007 and 2008-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comprasions where relevant.

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Both figures below reveal the payrolls of how a special and rich group of countries during two periods, 2000 to 2007, and 2008 to 2012. Overall, it can be seen that the UK started the series with hight growth over 5% followed by the US with rates near 3, 5 in and Canada with 3% in the first period. European nations showed started with a minor rate but stayed more stable during all periods, except Italy. Japan oscillated your wages rates all time that was analyzed. Canada, the US, and the UK demonstrated a constant and strong trend to grow in the first period. But, later just Canada keeping this positive tendency. The UK plunge your rates through for years and achieved negative rates as -2% in 2011. The US in the same period registered two negatives years and a small growth from 2009 to 2011. The European G7 nation's measures had majority increased, except Italy. France and Germany have a great performance during all time they registered only three years with a negative rate, France in 2008 with -02% and Germany with imperceptive decreases near 0, 1% in 2004 and 2005. The Italians numbers described a distinct situation, this context represents several oscillations over the years with positive picks with 2% in 2004 and droops like 2011 with -2%. Japan, only Asia nation in the G7, exhibited similar behavior of Italians, inconstant rates, in some moments rocket up as in 2011 with +3% and other moments plunge as 2001 with -2%.
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near 3, 5 in and Canada with 3% in the
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. European nations
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with a minor
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stayed more stable during all
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, except Italy. Japan oscillated your wages
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all time that
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Canada keeping this
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tendency. The UK plunge your
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through for years and achieved
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as -2% in 2011. The US in the same
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registered two negatives years and a
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growth from 2009 to 2011.

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European G7 nation's measures had majority increased, except Italy. France and Germany have a great performance during all time they registered
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, France in 2008 with -02% and Germany with imperceptive decreases near 0, 1% in 2004 and 2005. The Italians numbers
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a distinct situation, this context represents several oscillations over the years with
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picks with 2% in 2004 and droops like 2011 with -2%.

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moments rocket up as in 2011 with +3% and other moments plunge as 2001 with -2%.
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