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The diagram below the describe structure home smokery how it works .

The diagram below the describe structure home smokery how it works. 75LoA
The picture depicts the information about the how a home smokery works. It is clear that there are three steps involved in the process. Overall, home smokery works involves some simple steps the process starts with the fresh air and end with the ground level. The home smokery machine has three parts the first and foremost part is tan empty underground section with open air is allowed to flow into the machine by led. In the second part that fresh air goes into the machine which is similar to the first part. In the part, fire is started by editing logs through the lid on top. The fire is burning the heat core from a negative pipe the leads to a box. Finally, this box is the three part of machine and is located at ground level. In the box the food items thar need to be cooked are placed. The heat coming from two parts of the machine cooks that food items.
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pipe the leads to a box.
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IELTS academic The diagram below the describe structure home smokery how it works.

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163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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