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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Lad3

The rendered linear graph illustrates the number of international tourists who came to united kingdom for business, holiday and meeting friend and relative purpose from 1989 to 2009. Overall, it is manifest that the number of visitors for holiday purpose experienced a highest than business and meeting friend. In the fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that from 1989 to 1990 the number of visitors for holiday purpose stood at around 6. 5 millions respectively, then increased to millions in 1999, while it dipped in 2004, after that this number inclined and reached to again 6. 5 millions in 2009. Probing further, as regard business purpose decreasing to 4 millions in 1990 and increasing to 8 in 2006, the number of people dropped by 1 millions in the last year. similarly, about 3. 4 millions people travelled for meeting friend and relative purpose in 1989, this number rose dramatically to 7 millions in 2005. Afterthat it drop to 6 millions in the end of period.

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 for business, holiday and meeting friend and relative You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiondesiredirectiongoaldeterminationwish
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 from 1989 to 2009.

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 than business and meeting friend.

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 that from 1989 to 1990 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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respectively
, then increased to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in 1999, while it dipped in 2004, after that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 inclined and reached to again 6. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in 2009.

Probing further
, as regard business You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiondesiredirectiongoaldeterminationwish
purpose
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