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he chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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This bar chart shows percentage of population in the past, present, and future in Japan. It is clear from the table the proportion of age 56 or over is increased as well as year increasing. According to what is shown that number of population is incrased between 1990 and 2015, where the highest year is 2005. However, in 1950 number of Japaness almost 84 millions which is the lowest year. After that, Japan's population get increased over years to reach the max in 2005 which it becomes around 128 millions persons. In other hand, as shown in the table the percentage of people who is 65 years old or over is speedliy increased since 1950. In addition, it was around 5% during 1950 then jump to be 20% of total population in 2005. However, it will remain increased until reached 34% in 2035, and it will rocket its peak in 2055 to be around 41% of total population.
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in the past, present, and future in Japan. It is
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from the table the proportion of age 56 or over is
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increased
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as
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year
increasing.

According to what
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that number of
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incrased
between 1990 and 2015, where the highest
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is 2005.
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, in 1950 number of
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Japaness
almost 84 millions which is the lowest
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. After that, Japan's
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population
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get
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increased
over years to reach the max in 2005 which it becomes around 128 millions persons.

In other hand, as shown in the table the percentage of
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people
who is 65 years
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old
or over is
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speedliy
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since 1950.
In addition
, it was around 5% during 1950 then jump to be 20% of total
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population
in 2005.
However
, it will remain
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until reached 34% in 2035, and it will rocket its peak in 2055 to be around 41% of total
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