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The diagram below shows the plan of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the plan of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010. eaLA
The given diagram compares the medical centre in the year 2008 and 2010. it can be clearly seen that various facilities had been added in medical centre in 2010. as seen in the diagram, there was doctors office in the north direction of centre in 2008. in the centre there was corridor exact below was staff office and reception. Main entrance was on south and entrance door also open in waiting room. also it open in laboratory. moving out from waiting room heading towards east there was treatment room. according to the layout of medical centre in 2010, it seems large area cover up for added up faciliites. entering from main entrance same as earlier which one can laboratory and also can go to pharmacy side. one can entrea pharmacy and laboratory from coridorr also. On the west of medical centre had been added two additional room for patients educational room and mother and child room moving towards north passing corrider entre into large hall type on north-west side called treatment room and on its right there are four doctor's room and in the end thier store room.
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medical
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in the year 2008 and 2010.
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it
can be
clearly
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seen
that various facilities had been
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added
in
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medical
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centre
in 2010.
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as
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seen
in the diagram, there was doctors office in the north direction of
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centre
in 2008.
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in
the
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centre
there was corridor exact below was staff office and reception. Main entrance was on south and entrance door
also
open in waiting
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room
.
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also
it open in laboratory.
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moving
out from waiting
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room
heading towards east there was treatment
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room
.
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according
to the layout of
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medical
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centre
in 2010, it seems large area cover up for
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added
up
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faciliites
.
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entering
from main entrance same as earlier which one can laboratory and
also
can go to pharmacy side.
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one
can
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entrea
pharmacy and laboratory from
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coridorr
also
. On the west of
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medical
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centre
had been
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added
two additional
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room
for patients educational
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room
and mother and child
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room
moving towards north passing
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corrider
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entre
into large hall type on north-west side called treatment
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room
and on its right there are four
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doctor's
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room
and in the
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end
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thier
store
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room
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the plan of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
188 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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