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The Chart Below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Chart Below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. maEK
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in four average daily meals consumed by US citizens. Although Overdose of these nutrients might be detrimental to health of any individual. Overall, Americans are having dinner and lunch meal enriched with sodium and saturated fat, while snacks have been taken up with high added sugar. In details, the United States residents intake a large portion of sodium and saturated fat during their lunch and dinner time with approximately 72% of sodium and 63% saturated fat respectively. While added sugar is only engrossed 23% with dinner and 19% with lunch meal. Breakfast meal consists of equally divided sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar nutrients with an average of 14-16%. On the other hand, snacks have been comprising high added sugar with 42% of the total along with low sodium around 14% and one fifth of the saturated fat.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of sodium,
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saturated
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and
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added
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sugar
in four average daily
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meals
consumed by US citizens.
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Overdose of these nutrients might be detrimental to health of any individual.

Overall
, Americans are having dinner and lunch
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meal
enriched with sodium and
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saturated
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fat
, while snacks have
been taken
up with high
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added
sugar.

In
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details
, the United States residents intake a large portion of sodium and
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saturated
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fat
during their lunch and dinner time with approximately 72% of sodium and 63%
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saturated
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fat
respectively
. While
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added
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sugar
is
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engrossed 23% with dinner and 19% with lunch
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meal
. Breakfast
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meal
consists of
equally
divided sodium,
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saturated
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fat
, and
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added
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sugar
nutrients with an average of 14-16%.
On the other hand
, snacks have been comprising high
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added
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sugar
with 42% of the total along with low sodium around 14% and one fifth of the
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saturated
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fat
.
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IELTS academic The Chart Below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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