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expenditure of GDP will follow an upward trend, on the other hand, in education, and roads and railways sectors, the percentage of spending will experience a downward trend. The proportion of the expenditure in the health was increased over the next few years, an it will continue to increase in future. The percentage stood at 4% in 2000, which rose gradually, and it is expected to reach 7. 5% by 2025. On the other hand, the expenditure in the education and the transportation sectors will decline over the period given. In 2000, in the education sector, the spendings was higher than the other two sectors, but it went down steadily over next fee years. It is predicted that it will decline in near future, and will stand at just below 4% in 2025. Similar pattern also will be seen in transportation sectors. From 2000 to 2025, the percentage slightly fluctuated until 2015. It started from 4% in 2000, and it is estimated that, in 2025, it will remain around 3. 5%

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterExpenditure
expenditure
 of GDP will follow an upward trend, on the other hand
, in education, and roads and railways You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sectors
, the percentage of spending will experience a downward trend.

The proportion of the expenditure in the health was increased
 over the next
 few years, Possible typo. Did you mean "an" or "it"?anit
an it
 will continue to increase Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
. The percentage stood at 4% in 2000, which rose gradually
, and it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to reach 7. 5% by 2025.

On the other hand
, the expenditure in the education and the transportation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sectors
 will decline over the period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
. In 2000, in the education You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
, the Possible spelling mistake found.spending
spendings
 was higher than the other two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sectors
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it went down steadily
 over next
 fee years. It is predicted
 that it will decline in near future, and will stand at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 below 4% in 2025. Similar pattern also
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seen
 in transportation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sectors
. From 2000 to 2025, the percentage slightly
 fluctuated until 2015. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 from 4% in 2000, and it is estimated
 that, in 2025, it will remain around 3. 5%