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The graph below shows the number of hot dogs and buns eaten by the winners at the Nathan’s Hot Dog Eating contest from 1970 to 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The given graph illustrates data about numbers of eaten hot dogs and buns at the Nathan’s Hot Dog Eating Championship since 1970. In general, the figures showed an upward trend, which means that the record amount of fast-food eaten by the winners has been changing by each year. The high point was being reached in 2018; there were more than 70 eaten hotdogs and buns. It can be seen from the graph, that in the first decade of the period given, competitions were held only 4 times. Then, over twenty ears, the numbers rose negligibly, showing its lower point in 1888, when the number of hotdogs eaten was only over 10. Since 2000, the numbers increased significantly with figures going from approximately 25 in 2000 to 50 in the next year. Over the next 20 years, numbers fluctuated and hit the peak point. To conclude, according to information selected by Harvard Sports, the amount of all fast food consumed during the eating contest increased considerably throughout the period shown.
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of
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hot dogs and buns at the Nathan’s Hot Dog Eating Championship since 1970.

In general
, the figures
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showed
an upward trend, which means that the record amount of
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fast
-food
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eaten
by the winners has been changing by each year. The high point was
being reached
in 2018; there were more than 70
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eaten
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hotdogs
and buns.

It can be
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seen
from the graph, that in the
first
decade of the period
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given
, competitions
were held
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only
4 times. Then, over twenty ears, the
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numbers
rose
negligibly
, showing its lower point in 1888, when the
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number
of
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hotdogs
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eaten
was
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only
over 10. Since 2000, the
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numbers
increased
significantly
with figures going from approximately 25 in 2000 to 50 in the
next
year. Over the
next
20 years,
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numbers
fluctuated and hit the peak point.

To conclude
, according to information selected by Harvard Sports, the amount of all
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fast
food consumed during the eating contest increased
considerably
throughout the period shown.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of hot dogs and buns eaten by the winners at the Nathan’s Hot Dog Eating contest from 1970 to 2020.

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