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The graphs shows the viewer ship of dirrent tv programmes among three different age groups. Summerise the information be seleting and reporting the main features and main comparison where relavent.

The Pie Charts Provided the in Bordion about Varinue television programmes Preferred by three various age group. Overall, it is suprising to note viewer of sport program e that, with increased age and opposite trend was were decreased Seen th news Pagama the Among age group of 10-15, sports program was seen by over abater lawhich QA people fell by 12 Percent and lo percent views in next two age group Ca shtoon aal as popular al sports in 10-15 years old group but it popularity in 16-20 year old group by 151 but again it enjoyed by 20 of llor years old, lost it's Pencent Films and drama Programmes had high views in 16-20 years old age group in compare to Other two yooups, whicle 19 Percent a most 2 in fint group and Percent in last group. Followed by drama program 28 and 221 respectively. trend News Showed the downwand among three groups. It was Seen by only 6 percent of 10-15 years old 18% by second group and one-third Watched 21-25 years
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about
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Varinue
television
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programmes
Preferred by three various
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age
group.

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, it is
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suprising
to note

viewer of sport program e that, with increased
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age
and opposite trend was
were decreased
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Seen th
news
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Pagama


the Among
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age
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group
of 10-15, sports program was
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seen
by over
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abater
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lawhich
QA
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people
fell by 12
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Percent
and lo
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percent
views in
next
two
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age
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group
Ca
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shtoon
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aal
as popular
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al
sports in 10-15 years
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old
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group
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but
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it popularity
in 16-20
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year
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old
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group
by 151
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but
again it enjoyed by 20 of
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llor
years
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old
, lost it's
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Pencent


Films and drama
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Programmes
had high views in 16-20 years
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old
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age
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group
in compare to Other two
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yooups
,
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whicle
19
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a most 2 in
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fint
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group
and
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in last
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. Followed by drama program 28 and 221
respectively
.
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trend
News
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the
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downwand
among three
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groups
. It was
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by
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only
6
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percent
of 10-15 years
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old
18% by second
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group
and one-third
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Watched
21-25
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years

IELTS academic The graphs shows the viewer ship of dirrent tv programmes among three different age groups.

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