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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. kYYJe

The diagram shows the pictorial representation on the number of questions raised in three different ways to the Tourist Information Office requesting for information in a city over a six month period in 2011. As seen from the graph, the number of enquires made in person and by telephone were increasing steadilly where as the number of enquires made by letter/email were decreasing. Looking at the enquiries made in person, we can see that it was increasing every month. In January, the umber of enquiries made in person was well below the enquiries made by the other ways but ended up very high at the end of the June. There was an initial drop in the number of enquiries made by telephone in the month of February compared to January but the number increased to 1000 in March and same stayed till April. It was shown steady increase afterwards.

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shows
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number
 of questions raised in three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 ways to the Tourist Information Office requesting for information in a city over a When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "six-month"six-month
six month
 period in 2011.

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seen
 from the graph, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of Possible spelling mistake. 'enquires' is British English.inquires
enquires
 made in person and by telephone were increasing Possible spelling mistake found.steadily
steadilly
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where as
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of Possible spelling mistake. 'enquires' is British English.inquires
enquires
 made by letter/email were decreasing.

Looking at the Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiries' is British English.inquiries
enquiries
 made in person, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that it was increasing every month. In January, the umber of Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiries' is British English.inquiries
enquiries
 made in person was well below the Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiries' is British English.inquiries
enquiries
 made by the other ways This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 ended up This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 high at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the June.

There was an initial drop in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiries' is British English.inquiries
enquiries
 made by telephone in the month of February compared to January This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 increased to 1000 in March and same stayed till April. It was shown
 steady increase afterwards. 